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Starstruck: Chapter 3 Leaving

-At the hospital-

Braeburn: Big Mac? You awake?

Big Mac: *opens eyes* now I am… Hey Braeburn how ya doing?

Braeburn:  Good you?

Big Mac: I'm fine

Big Mac: Good *bro Hoof*

Braeburn: I heard you got hurt… What happened?

Big Mac: ah, I was harvesting apples and I spotted someone and I tried to kick the tree
but a branch fell on me.

Applejack: Starshine?

Big Mac: Eeyup

Braeburn: Who's Starshine?

Applejack: Oh just someone who big mac lik-

-big mac shuts applejack up before she says anything else-

Big mac: She's a friend of mine, that's all

Braeburn: Oh cool.

Doctor: Sorry but visitors hour is up now, you have to go. Sorry.

Braeburn: See ya cuz

Applejack: Bye big mac

Big mac: bye guys

-Meanwhile Starshine is at her home pacing while talking to twilight-

Starshine: oh gosh, I hope he's alright…

Twilight: I'm sure he's fine

Starshine: Maybe I should leave ponyville, this probably wouldn't of happened if I wasn't here…

Twilight: No! you can't leave Starshine…

Starshine: No twilight, I have made up my mind I am leaving ponyville; I can't bear to see
him hurt….

Twilight: But hes nearly better…

Starshine: I'm sorry I have made up my mind. I know I've only just got here but I don't
belong here, Canterlot is my home…

Twilight: I can't let you do this… *runs out the house*

Starshine: *looks around her house* This might take a while… I might as well start now…
*starts to pack up*

-Meanwhile at the hospital-

Twilight: Big Mac!

Doctor: I'm sorry but you can't be in here now…

Twilight: This is an emergency *runs past*

Big Mac: What?

Twilight: Starshine thinks it's her fault you got hurt and now she wants t leave ponyville, shes already started packing…

Big Mac: no! she can't leave, she's only just got here…

-Big Mac gets out of his hospital bed-

Doctor: Hey, sir you can't get out of your bed please sit back down.

Big Mac: No, I have to speak to someone *falls on the floor*

Doctor: Sir you can't go anywhere im sorry…

Big Mac: but I need to..

Doctor: you have only got a few days left, that's all…

Big Mac: That might be too long… *gets back into bed* Twilight I can't do anything… Please tell the others and try stop her, please…

Twilight: im on it!

-2Days later Starshine has finished packing-

Starshine: Finally  finished  *opens door and sees all her friends out there to say
goodbye*

Starshine: *looks at friends and ears fold back* Bye guys *gives them all a hug and starts
to walks off*

-Starshine decides to stop off somewhere before she left-

Starshine: I'm sure one more cupcake can't hurt…

Big Mac: I thought I would find you here…

Starshine: Big Mac?

Big mac: Eeyup…

Starshine: You're okay! *hugs*

Big Mac: and where do you think your off to?

Starshine: Back to Canterlot…

Big mac: no your not I will miss you too much

Starshine: no you won't

Big mac: yes I will because I love you…

Starshine: What really? No you don't…

Big Mac: Here let me show you *kisses Starshine on the lips gently* See I told you so…

Starshine: I.. I love you to! *hugs and starts to cry*

Big Mac: Please don't leave… *hugs tighter*

Starshine: im not going anywhere *kisses big mac*

Big mac: Now lets go unpack your things…

Starshine: Thanks *pulls the heavy carts for a bit*

Big mac: here let me take that. *takes the carts off of Starshine*

Starshine: Thanks *smiles*

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I can't wait to read more, or is this the 'happily ever after' part of the story?
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~kyo4kusanagi Oct 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww so cute
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~kyo4kusanagi Oct 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome
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